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Lyrics of your own design.

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by Baezlebub, Apr 29, 2003.

  1. Baezlebub Gems: 18/31
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    As Tal suggested...
    Feel free to post you own if you do so wish, I intend to add some of my others later on.

    Take Me Home
    Death it seems is looming near,
    dark and black is what I fear.
    Dangerbells booming in my brain,
    screaming curses, I'm insane.

    Locked inside this padded cell,
    none to hurt but myself.
    Communication link is gone,
    now I know that I'm alone.

    [Chorus]
    This place is dead, take me home
    I am dead, take me home
    wasting painfully, take me home
    take me home, take me home

    Wrap my arms up, intense cold
    wishing curses on this world
    Deathly pale, my heart is dead
    Living dankly no life thread

    My will is gone, shell of steel
    torn apart, i do not feel
    unbroken silence muffling me
    all i want is to be free

    Chorus

    Straight jacket love is blazing hell
    I wait here for the final bell
    When death rides for me
    I'll welcome him without a scream

    Chorus

    Take Me Home.
     
  2. Erebus Gems: 16/31
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    A morbid love song...very interesting, but excellent none the less.
     
  3. Lazy Bonzo Gems: 24/31
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    I posted some of these here last year some time. However i will post those and some more now:

    This first one was written about 16-18 months ago-

    Chorus:
    I look for sympathy
    But all I get are points and stares
    And worthless empathy
    Because no-one cares

    But maybe out there
    Someone cares
    Or maybe it’s just another hopeless dream
    Sometimes I just want to stand and scream.

    Chorus:
    I look for sympathy
    But all I get are points and stares
    And worthless empathy
    Because no-one cares

    Once or twice I had dreams
    But I always woke up
    Into the nightmare of my life
    So I just keep on singing.

    Chorus

    I thought I had friends
    I thought they‘d help
    But they just blame me
    Cos no-one cares that it’s not my fault.

    Chorus

    Now people don’t listen to the music
    They just mock me
    And throw their sh*t at me
    Why me, (slower) Why me.

    Chorus 2
    I still look for sympathy
    Still they just give me points and stares
    But maybe there’s a better place
    Maybe out there

    That’s where I’m a gonna go
    They gave me some pills
    Told me they’d take me to a better place
    Where there are green hills
    And no-one mocks you.


    Chorus 2

    I put them in my mouth
    But I’m still here
    Sitting on a street corners singing this song
    There is no better place just here and now.


    I look for sympathy
    But all I get are points and stares
    And worthless empathy
    Because no-one cares
    No-one cares about one guy
    Sitting on the corner
    On a one-way ride to hell
    Maybe there is a better place somewhere
    But there ain’t no way to get there.
    We are here and now
    But no-one cares
    If you live, if you die
    No-one cares
    When you die and you look for them pearly gates
    But all you can see is a fast one-way ride to hell.
    Cos even hell is a better place than here
    But no-one cares
    No-one cares.


    Hate

    You hate me
    You hate me for who i am and what i was
    You hate me for what i did and what i said
    You hate me for who you were and what you became
    You hate me for what i know

    Does your hate know limits
    of the grey clouds of your mind?
    Did i set it free?
    Or do you open the cage?

    You took back what you said
    and tried to hide the truth
    then you tear it all away
    Give me the lies
    Give me the mis-truths
    I can't handle reality

    It changes from day to day
    From high to low but always hate
    How did i get caught up in this fray?
    Pack me up in a crate
    Send me off to the city
    I don't want your pity
    Now give me the lows
    Give me the dips
    I can't handle the high doze
    Now it tears and rips

    Does it change at all?
    Or does it just move
    I live in apall
    But what does that prove?

    This only says the lies
    Of another day of pain
    Send me away so i cries
    Then snatch me back again
    I turn round so i fall
    But the torment doesn't stop
    I stand short and tall
    One day we learn why we drop
    When we do we stand and glare
    No-one believes the truth
    It messes up your hair
    Theres a hill on that booth
    It collapses around me
    The world is gone
    But still it's out to get me, us, you, him, her, IT!
    It's out there
    Round every corner of the circle
    Every bend in the square
    It knows what it is
    But we live amongst our lies
    We turn to the radio
    But it blows up in our face
    The fastest race
    is never started
    Because it'll always get you..
    HATE!


    Those 2 were (some of) the ones that i posted before. These are newer ones (though i do not have all my lyrics on this computer).

    Special

    Do you know that i sit around every nite
    Waiting for your call
    Staring at the fone
    Staring at the wall

    But theres a wall in my heart
    I can't get over it
    I can't go round
    I can't get the memory
    outa my head
    outa my head

    I see you all around me
    Every sense thinks your still here
    But my heart knows your gone
    Did i really stand a chance?

    Just an ordinary guy
    with just one chance for happiness
    One chance for joy
    One chance for one ordinary guy
    with one special girl

    You hung around for a while
    But i didnt see my chance
    Now you're with a special guy
    No ordinary guy for you
    Cos your too special
    to be mine.


    Alive The spaced formatting is intentional.

    My senses
    tell me that
    i'm alive
    But i don't belive them
    My senses
    tell me that
    i'm alive
    But how can this be
    that
    i'm alive?

    You're gone
    You left so long ago
    Not even a note goodbye
    I'm not even worth that much

    Had to hear it second hand
    It's too much
    It's no good
    So, yea, you left me
    So, i'm alone
    But i'm alive
    But how can this be?

    Cos you've gone away
    And you're not coming back today
    To
    let me know
    that
    you're still there
    With me
    Even though you're not here
    And you're gone so far, far away
    From me
    And i'm not
    alive anymore

    Dirty Rock < i have no idea how i wrote this one :confused:

    I'm not listening
    with my dirty mind
    Not gona hear those words
    that i left behind

    Not turning back
    to the way i was
    Staying clean
    all alone

    Content, as a rock
    and i will rock no more
    not far
    not near
    from here
    im gone
    so say goodbye
    and i'll be
    another rock
    and i will rock no more

    Ain't gonna walk the streets
    listen to the dirty beat
    underneath my feet
    keepin the clean shoes
    keepin the clean way
    Passin by the rocks
    of another generation
    and i will
    rock no more

    Sailin away
    livin the life that im wishin for
    but that life's back there
    back along those streets
    back along that beat

    Can't quite seem to find the
    words to let me go
    from this rock of my rock
    flesh of flesh
    hate of my love
    time to rock again
    like a rock


    Ok have just discovered that all my other songs are at my other computer (which i can not get to until tuesday, will post then).


    @Baezlebub , very good song :thumb:
     
  4. Lazy Bonzo Gems: 24/31
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    [​IMG] OK i'm back at my house proper, and here are some of the remaining songs, in no particular order (just as i find them).

    This one i appear to have just entiteled ballad. I don't remember writing it.


    there was a time
    when i couldn't move
    and there was a day
    when i couldn't tell
    But now all is well
    and i can see
    what i want
    and go to the places
    that i want to go

    I've been here before
    When i was young
    the earth turned to dust
    beneath my feet
    and i could run
    like those that knew
    what to see

    But there was a time
    when i couldn't move
    and on a day
    i could not see
    which way to go
    then i tuurned and saw my way

    faster i turn from this world
    faster it follows behind
    can i get away?

    I know your face
    the shape of your mouth
    your hair and eyes
    but now i see them not
    this is the turn
    you live and die everyday
    no memories

    faster i turn from this world
    faster it follows behind
    can i get away?


    Locked alone

    So i'm all alone
    Yea, so, you left me
    Left me all alone

    The curtains are twitching
    And yea im still itching
    for your touch
    The windows are tight shut

    Locking myself out
    Cos you locked me in
    You held me down
    Tried to make me yours
    But i was already there
    Locked in your heart
    All alone

    Yeah i'm alone
    But not like you'd notice
    Needing your touch
    Melting to your sight

    Trying to keep it all together
    Stop the swinging door
    Slammed shut
    so long ago

    And i'm
    Locking myself out
    Cos you locked me in
    You held me down
    Tried to make me yours
    But i was already there
    Locked in your heart
    All alone

    That Boy

    You're looking around
    But im not around anymore
    I'm not here to watch you
    I'm not here to see you buy
    You never asked why

    I was just that boy
    some guy
    the one you never knew

    You never wondered
    Who the one you couldn't see was
    Never asked why
    i was always around
    but never there

    I was just that boy
    some guy
    the one you never knew
    the one not good enough
    for you

    Your seeming puzzled
    Cos im not here but you never cared
    When i was
    Who i am
    What i need

    I was just that boy
    some guy
    the one you never knew

    I was just that boy
    some guy
    the one you never knew
    the one not good enough
    for you
    Never living up to you
    Never sayin what i knew
    Did you feel it too?
    Then why'd you never see me

    Now im gone
    not that boy
    not some guy
    cos you never knew me
    to say goodbye

    to that boy
    just some guy
    the one you never saw
    the one you never knew
    Never saw that boy
    Some guy you never knew
    Now he's gone
    and now you know you needed him
    you needed that boy
    the one you never saw
    just some guy
    but he's the one you never knew
    and he's the one you need now

    Wound(ed)

    The wounds of those
    who bear no scar
    are those wounds of the soul
    they live with them under the skin
    the pain of their existence
    is not that of a living nightmare
    but of a long death of un-denied end
    their death is long and already gone
    now they walk and talk
    their pain is in the world around us
    but no-one turns to them to help
    only the wounds we see can be healed

    The wounds of those
    that can't be seen
    are not seen
    when I'm down
    when I'm high
    and I'm all around
    but those wounds don't heal
    the deepness of a feather
    cuts my soul in two


    And when I'm down
    I can't give no more
    lay me down to die
    beneath the dying sky
    I can't take it no more
    the wounds don't heal
    though they are long past

    but I'm down
    and I won't get up again
    leave me be
    let me go
    turn away
    I'll stay
    For my epitaph

    Killed by the wounds that can't be seen
    Thinner than a feather
    Deeper than a valley
    No rest for this soul
    Of tormented pain


    When and How

    The wounds of those
    who bear no scar
    are those wounds of the soul
    they live with them under the skin
    the pain of their existence
    is not that of a living nightmare
    but of a long death of un-denied end
    their death is long and already gone
    now they walk and talk
    their pain is in the world around us
    but no-one turns to them to help
    only the wounds we see can be healed

    The wounds of those
    that can't be seen
    are not seen
    when I'm down
    when I'm high
    and I'm all around
    but those wounds don't heal
    the deepness of a feather
    cuts my soul in two


    And when I'm down
    I can't give no more
    lay me down to die
    beneath the dying sky
    I can't take it no more
    the wounds don't heal
    though they are long past

    but I'm down
    and I won't get up again
    leave me be
    let me go
    turn away
    I'll stay
    For my epitaph

    Killed by the wounds that can't be seen
    Thinner than a feather
    Deeper than a valley
    No rest for this soul
    Of tormented pain


    I've also written songs that were more poems, though i do sing them when i write them. I haven't posted those though.

    [ July 02, 2004, 19:52: Message edited by: Lazy Bonzo ]
     
  5. Baezlebub Gems: 18/31
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    THat is really quite deep, man. Are they just lyrics, or is there music to them as well?

    I really should pull my finger out and post some more, these ones with a link to the music. I am really lazy.

    Ps. I never meant my song to be a love song. Is that how it come across?>
     
  6. Khazraj Gems: 20/31
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    Beazlebub

    You are very interesting. Nice and realistic. You are quite a pragmatist right? Since when did you start studying "Eastern Mysticism" over vanilla "Western Philosophy"?

    Cool
     
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