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No more rainbows (Poetry)

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by SleepleSS, May 19, 2005.

  1. SleepleSS Gems: 24/31
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    [​IMG] I see the beautiful rainbow in the sky
    But now her beauty fills me with fright
    The bottle of red wine takes me high
    While I wait for the moon at night
    The rainbow flirts with clouds and sun
    While the moon is there for me
    The Rainbow is beauty from which I run
    Because only in moonlight I’m free

    The sun tries to drown me in her light
    The reflection of the moon is all I need
    She’s shinning down with all her might
    But the promise of darkness keeps me on my feet
    Rainbow and sun now fill the sky
    But I know I can win this fight
    Filled with trust, I will not die
    As my moon lit the sky at night

    [ May 19, 2005, 15:08: Message edited by: SleepleSS ]
     
    SleepleSS, May 19, 2005
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    Hmm. Nice. This poem reminded me of Depeche Mode's Waiting for the Night. :) A song I could always relate to.

    I'm waiting for the night to fall
    When everything is bearable...
     
    Dendri, May 22, 2005
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  3. The Irreligious Paladin Gems: 7/31
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    I like it. Thumbs up!

    suggestion: Use your punctuations, so I can read it out loud to myself. The way I read it as opposed to the way Dendri here reads it could be way different, because it reminds me nothing of Depech Mode's Waiting for the Night.

    But seriously, excellent use of language and what.
     
    The Irreligious Paladin, May 23, 2005
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    Poetry is a gift
    to turn hollow words alive
    Into darkness I shift
    refleckting in the blade of a knive
    for I'm a decipel of the moon
    as the lifless sinners burn
    digging for gold with rusty spoon
    The beast in its grave shall turn...
     
    SleepleSS, Jun 15, 2005
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